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Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city

Majority of the World's population are living in the villages while others are living in the cities. But I prefer to spend my life into village. I feel this way for two reasons for, which I will explain in this essay.
Firstly, the environments of village are cleaner than cities, it the other hand the cities having the polluted environments. This type of surrounding will decrease the chances of diseases. To reduce the occurrence of this type of diseases people are now day turn towards the village. For instance, my uncle is earlier living in the city. Then his mother found positive to corona virus, his family doctor suggests him to live in the clean and non-polluted environment. In the searching of this kind of nature they transfer to the village. Therefore, for healthy body we need to live in small town.
Moreover, the cost of living in the small town is negligible regarding to cities. In this busy world every people do not get the high paying job. Also, the cost of health, education is also the higher than the small town. for example, my maternal uncle is the farmer. They earn money by doing the farming, poultry, and animal husbandry. The amount they earn is sufficient to him and their family. They spend their earning into their livelihood and todays he is happily spending their time with their family in the village. Thus, in the pursuit of happiness with little amount of money we must live in village.
In conclusion, I prefer to live in the village. I feel this way because village's environment is full of oxygen and because with the little amount of money you can spend your life joyfully.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 284.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70774647887 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45511936351 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517605633803 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0021981926 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.85 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255083926485 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834823062253 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992263658349 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157440370964 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353025710362 0.0645574589148 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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