Some people like to stay up late at night and then sleep late in the mornings. Others prefer to go to bed earlier and get up earlier the next day. Which do you prefer? Use specific examples and reasons to explain your preference.
Every day, during the rush hours, commuters go or come back home from their job. Most people believe that if you are to be successful, you should wake up early in the morning. Because of that, I always blamed myself. I usually sleep at midnight and wake up late, so I was jealous of people who wake up early. Until a few months ago, that I have read a book whose name was “When”. In this book, the author mentions the human body’s natural clock and says that different sleep cycle in each person is natural. As a result, this book relieved me from my mental concerns about my sleep cycle, my health, and my future success.
In the mentioned book, the author rejects the common belief about early wake uppers. He concludes with scientific facts that different people have different sleep cycles. For some people, it is required to go to bed early and wake up early. In simple words, their body is charged properly in this way and they would gain more energy for tomorrow from their sleep. These types of people can do their jobs during the morning until the afternoon with their maximum amount of energy and focus. In the evening, their concentration and ability are decreased in a considerable amount; and even, they should avoid doing sensitive jobs that need more concentration.
On the other hand, some people would like to do their jobs in the afternoon or even during the night and their bodies are adjusted for these circumstances. So, it is good for them to sleep and wake up late. Their bodies would have better results in this way. Like me, most of computer workers prefer to work until late at night rather than wake up early and start their jobs sooner. Nowadays, most of the high tech companies accepted this fact and adapted their schedule to reduce the work stress of their employees.
I recommend reading this book. Because it gives lots of information about these two types of people and mentions more differences between them. I personally prefer to stay up all night and this book gave me enough confidence to be happy about my sleep schedule. Now, I do not compare myself with other peoples and I am satisfied with my natural behavior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65535248042 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34316129837 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527415143603 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3500791961 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0454545455 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4090909091 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 5.45110844103 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204039479135 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627534680565 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679003487743 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133420496713 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306938420921 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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