Some people think that parents should plan their children’s leisure time carefully. Other people believe? those children should decide for themselves how to spend their free time, Which idea do you agree with? Give reasons for your choice.
I think that children should manage their own free time. Managing their free time helps them in thousands of way. I totally agree with the second group and I think that children should manage their free time alone. I want to reinforce my opinion from the following reasons.
The chief reason why I generally agree with the second group is that by this way they could learn how to make the plan for themselves in the personal life and learn time managing which is so important for their carrier. It is parent responsibility to prepare their children for their future life and nowadays managing time is one of the hardest parts of most of the youngest and adults so. Therefore, I think that if children learn how to manage their free time in the beginning, they can get the ability to manage their working and meeting planes too.
Secondly, they easily recognize their responsibilities. Admittedly, if children don’t mention and put their homework in their free time, they will get in trouble in the school and so forth in the home. consequently, they will learn their responsibilities. Moreover, they will understand that they do that homework just for themselves. Noone gets in trouble unless their own if they don’t do them. For example, when I was a child and stated school. My mom forced me to do my homework. After a short time my mom let me do what I want. in the first day, I didn’t do my homework. Unfortunately, tomorrow I got in trouble in the school they call my mom and report this situation to my mom. After I came back home. My mom didn’t let me go and play with my friend, so I totally understand that if I don’t manage my free time carefully, I will get in trouble.
The last but not the least, they could enjoy their free time and can focus to their lesson better. One can relax on playing football with his or her friend other loves to draw. Parents should allow their children to understand their talent and chose their way. All sort of the playings didn’t enjoyable on the same level to everyone. I believe that, if children do what they want in their spare time they feel enjoy more than before and can get concentrate to other parts of their lessons better than before.
All in all, even though, some of the parents want to control all aspect of their children life, I think that children understand and can recognize everything like adults and they just don’t have enough experiment and they could get experiment just by managing all aspects like their free time by themselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 166, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to time'
Suggestion: to time
...emselves in the personal life and learn time managing which is so important for thei...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
...in the school and so forth in the home. consequently, they will learn their responsibilities...
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Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ol. My mom forced me to do my homework. After a short time my mom let me do what I wa...
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Line 3, column 544, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...hort time my mom let me do what I want. in the first day, I didn't do my home...
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Line 3, column 701, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...om and report this situation to my mom. After I came back home. My mom didn't le...
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Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... than before. All in all, even though, some of the parents want to control all aspect of t...
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Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cts like their free time by themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i think, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 84.0 43.0788530466 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2093.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.671875 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59204651923 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426339285714 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 66.1756934229 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.72 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.92 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362333733538 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122396484764 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978037109826 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239535099125 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732954572103 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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