Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Parents have an important role in raising their children from childhood to adulthood. They nurture and take care of every need of their children. In that way, they express their sense of love and affection for their children. When their children grow up and become adults, they demand independence from their parents while some of them feel to live with them for a long time as possible. However, from my point of view, it is better for adults to live independently.
The first reason why I prefer adults to be independent is that they learn the difference between good and bad things. Adults have to make several important decision ranging from financial to their personal relationships. Being independent, they have to take all decisions alone without any assistance from their parents. Indeed, at first these young adult end up taking a wrong decision but in turn, learn from those mistakes which may be beneficial later in their life. For example, a young boy is in a relationship with a girl whom he later finds has been cheating on him and has an affair with someone else. Such a mistake made by the boy makes himself aware of the characters of girls and later the boy gets more careful choosing for a life partner.
Also, being independent, a young adult can distinguish between a good and bad company. For example, my friend went for his under-graduation to a different city, where he lived independently. During the initial years of his college, he was under the influence of bad company and got addicted to drugs and alcohol. Such addiction had a negative impact on his academics and as a result, he secured low grades in his initial years. So, in order to improve his grades, he abandoned his friendship with his addicted friends and became friends with studious and hard-working students in the college with whom he studied regularly. Such a good company had a significant impact on his studies and help him to improve his grades in the final year.
Another reason why I prefer living independently is that an adult has to support himself or herself financially without any assistance from their parents. As a result, a young adult has to find a job in order to feed themselves. Working in the industry, such young adults learn new skills and become trained in various fields. In short, such a pool of young talent turns them into skilled manpower and become an asset for the nation. Therefore, the nation builds up its base of human capital with more young and talented professionals.
In conclusion, young adults should live independently as living alone teaches them some of the most important lessons in life which a teacher or parent cannot teach. Also, living independently makes an adult be financially sustainable to lead their lives.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, in short, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2298.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87898089172 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72094078149 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496815286624 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 703.8 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0086005207 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33939270183 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103493401757 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682524337584 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206856781107 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777886226089 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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