study abroad to get into life successfully
Nowadays, studying abroad has been one of the most considerable options for students’ education because many people think that “Study abroad is the key to get into life successfully.”. Personally, I strongly agree with this statement owing to some following reasons.
Firstly, overseas students will have a chance to be more open-minded and mature. In reality, they will receive a better studying environment when be taught by professors in the international universities. Therefore, they can study and gain knowledge in a realistic way. Besides, they will have a opportunity to start a new journey independently and experience a new culture. As a result, they will easily and quickly develop their mindset and life skills.
Secondly, there is no reason to deny that with a degree of international university, the graduate has better opportunities of employment. As they learn with an expert in university with adequate conditions such as laboratory with modern technology, definitely, they have a rich body of knowledge in their major. Thank to this, overseas students would maximize their potential skill and be able to success their chosen careers.
Finally, there is still some negative aspects about studying abroad such as being abroad may be hard for some teenagers or someone who have strong link with their families and friends. However, the reality could be different. Today, we have many communications platforms through the Internet. For instance, we can use Facebook, Facetime, Instagram, … and easily have a video call with each other. Therefore, the students still can talk with their families, friends to share some stories about their new life everyday.
In conclusion, I totally agree with study abroad is the key to get into life successfully in spite of their difficulties. With all of big advantages that studying abroad brings to, those negative sides can seem to be negligible.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a realistic way" with adverb for "realistic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...fore, they can study and gain knowledge in a realistic way. Besides, they will have a opportunity ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... realistic way. Besides, they will have a opportunity to start a new journey inde...
^
Line 7, column 509, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...share some stories about their new life everyday. In conclusion, I totally agree with...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34653465347 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00056089475 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577557755776 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0386770057 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2941176471 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05882352941 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270233067635 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881771933041 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146777886633 0.0737576698707 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192627487181 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161845062809 0.0645574589148 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a realistic way" with adverb for "realistic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...fore, they can study and gain knowledge in a realistic way. Besides, they will have a opportunity ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... realistic way. Besides, they will have a opportunity to start a new journey inde...
^
Line 7, column 509, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...share some stories about their new life everyday. In conclusion, I totally agree with...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34653465347 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00056089475 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577557755776 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0386770057 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2941176471 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05882352941 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270233067635 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881771933041 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146777886633 0.0737576698707 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192627487181 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161845062809 0.0645574589148 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.