Television advertising directed toward young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.
I agree with the statement that television advertising directed toward young children (Aged two to five) should not be allowed. Television may not have a lot of effect on today's society because the technology has taken over. But it still has a lot of effect on people especially children who's parents can't afford a smart device. As a child of two to five years old you will want anything you see on the television that attracts you.
For example children used to watch Dora the Explorer and in Dora the Explorer swiper loves to steal things from people but in reality you can't tell someone to stop swiping stuff from you. And an other example is that in a lot of cartoons animals can talk back to you which is not true in real life. Or when someone in cartoon has magic powers but this doesn't happen in real life.
Watching too much television is bad for children's eyes. They should be playing with friends or with toys. Children are easy to be controlled because they don't know what is right and wrong at that age. Cartoons are just for happy/fun times but you won't always learn things from them because cartoons always have happy endings which also doesn't happen in real life.
You do learn something from Snow White which is not to take food from strangers , because you don't know what their intentions are. Advertisements on the television are mostly for companies to expand their products.
From what I have heard from my mother , my cousin used to believe that he could fly and ended up jumping from his bed and broke his arm in progress. Not everything you see on television implies in real life. Meaning parents should keep an eye on their children. And they should be able to say no when children demand certain stuff they saw on the television. They should also explain why they can't always get/have what they want in life just because they want it. They should also be taught that they should be grateful with what they already have
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...evision may not have a lot of effect on todays society because the technology has take...
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Line 1, column 287, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: who's
...of effect on people especially children whos parents cant afford a smart device. As ...
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Line 1, column 300, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...people especially children whos parents cant afford a smart device. As a child of tw...
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Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hos parents cant afford a smart device. As a child of two to five years old you wi...
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Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...l things from people but in reality you cant tell someone to stop swiping stuff from...
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Line 4, column 193, Rule ID: AN_OTHER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: another
...one to stop swiping stuff from you. And an other example is that in a lot of cartoons an...
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Line 4, column 353, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ne in cartoon has magic powers but this doesnt happen in real life. Watching too ...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... are easy to be controlled because they dont know what is right and wrong at that ag...
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Line 7, column 337, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ns always have happy endings which also doesnt happen in real life. You do learn ...
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Line 10, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...which is not to take food from strangers , because you dont know what their intent...
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Line 10, column 95, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... take food from strangers , because you dont know what their intentions are. Adverti...
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Line 13, column 38, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... From what I have heard from my mother , my cousin used to believe that he could...
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Line 13, column 394, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...sion. They should also explain why they cant always get/have what they want in life ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61604584527 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24407402181 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510028653295 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.275263429 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7894736842 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3684210526 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21052631579 5.45110844103 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258120120363 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09771299941 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151400094615 0.0737576698707 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14900074473 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136959834316 0.0645574589148 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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