The advantages of sport and social activities has been a contraversial issue in the socities lately. While some people claim that student must be focus just libraries, books and classes. Others maintains that is sport and social activities are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 43.0788530466 5% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 52.1666666667 4% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 205.0 1977.66487455 10% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 39.0 407.700716846 10% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25641025641 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.49899939944 4.48103885553 56% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 2.74299058878 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 32.0 212.727598566 15% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.820512820513 0.524837075471 156% => OK
syllable_count: 62.1 618.680645161 10% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.6003584229 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.2635033757 48.9658058833 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.3333333333 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13235034082 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942662304841 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511158212987 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13235034082 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.34 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 13.0 86.8835125448 15% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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