Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
the advantages and disadvantages of small number of people over a long period of important for a happiness has been a controversial issue in the societies lately. while some people claim that small number of people important for happiness has a number of advantages, others maintain that it is socially disadvantages. although both sides have significent concrete justifications, ı strognly believe that small number of people has important risks that shouldn't be ignored. ı will elucidate some of my points of support in the following paragraphes.
happiness is a changeable thing for everyone. some people dont need to friends for happiness , another one just need to friends for that. that mean ambiguous word. sometimes can be needed friends but they cant stand by us. everyone has a personal life so sometimes cant be get round for somebody. turkish people love old friends for happiness. they dont like new things for example new friends. some people cant trust new one but ı think it should be. friends dont be near or dont want be neat to you.
new friends mean new excitement in life. you can touch someones life and you can observe someones life. making new friends really happiness in this life because everyone fixed so you can change somethings like your friends. ıt can be enjoy in this fixed life. some people are living so monoton and they have depression after a while, they have a foot and tongue that mean travelling and speaking different people and making new friends can open the door slightly in fun side of this life.
some people claim that small number of people over a long time is important for a happiness.
fixed life has can be make a peaceful brain and happy life. but, ı totally disagree with this assertions. making new friends important for a happiness because of fixed life is a monoton, monoton is a boring. people must speak with stranger person in school, market and so on. being a social makes people happy because people social organism for many centuries.
all in all, making new friends makes you happy than small number of people over a long time. we must be social in this fixed world, we need travel we need speak another people and we need to share knowledge or something for being life. we have been since our creation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83418367347 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51983950425 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441326530612 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9165942028 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1851851852 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5185185185 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 5.45110844103 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 39.0 5.5376344086 704% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306894377006 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100379920322 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083183793227 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194721467181 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580932945202 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.47 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.