TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I agree that telling the truth in the relationship between people is very important. I can not say that it is the most important thing as normally I am trying to avoid the supreme degrees in the evaluation. But truth telling definitely is the one of most important things.

Firstly, it is honest. And both, your partner and yourself, deserve the honesty. In relationships it is supposed to live every day and spend the life time with one person. And if - for some reasons - you can not show some events of your life or some features of your character, this may mean that you are not yet ready for the relationship or this is not the right person for you to be with. Unless you are the secret agent and some events of your life just can not be disclosed, but this, of course, is a joke.

Secondly, telling the truth makes the life easier. You do not have to keep the variations of created lies in your head and you do not undergo yourself to double standards. Truth protects the personality keeping it solid. For instance, one of the friends of mine did not want to disclose to hist friends and family that he lost his job, he continued to leave home every morning returning in the evening simulated that nothing happened. As far as he was nit telling anyone, his friend could not provide him the support in finding of new job such as recommendations or contacts, and his family could not provide him psychological support. The truth came out after multiple inconsistencies in his daily behavior observed by his family as no one can live a double life for a long time without being noticed. This situation resulted in his deep psychological crisis because later on when truth came out in addition to problems with the job he got a problem with his wife hence she was hurt with the lack of trust from him.

Finally, truth means a respect to precious others. Telling the truth to your close people means that you have a trust in them. And it also means that you respect yourself. As, for instance, sometimes people tell to their friends so called "small lies" which can be told in the situation when for the person it is simpler to lie about something than to explain the real situation. Sometimes people can tell small lie not to argue for hours about something or not to defend their position in front of their friends, for example. But lying in such situation means that person is not confident in his or her self enough, which, in it's turn, means that person doesn't have enough respect for his/ herself.

Overall, I would say, let us be mature in our relationships with our precious others and friends, let us behave as responsible adults and tell the truth because it is easy and enjoyable.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 146, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...upposed to live every day and spend the life time with one person. And if - for some reas...
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Line 8, column 666, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
..., which, in its turn, means that person doesnt have enough respect for his/ herself. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, of course, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2229.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 486.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58641975309 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52103402804 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479423868313 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 674.1 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4629571615 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.318181818 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190025473585 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670285148038 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561008598311 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123157703673 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525509341783 0.0645574589148 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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