TPO 31
In this ever-changing world, people change their lifestyle opposing to the past, and make efforts to adapt to the world as fast as they can. Some people might view the changes as disturbance since this may be the source of being less happy compared to the past. However, others may stand a different point of view that they are still satisfied with their lives just like people living in the past. As far as I am concerned, people now are not less happy or less satisfied with lives than people who lives in the past for the following reasons.
First of all, people now have more entertaining activities to engage in, so they can still content to their lives. With the state-of-the-art technologies, companies are constantly releasing diverse types of entertaining device, which provide people lots of entertaining activities to choose from. This can serve people as relaxation in this changing world because people might feel stressed out for the competitive world. However, people living in the past does not have these advanced technologies, which limits their entertainment. Therefore, I think people now are happier than people were in the past as they have more enetertaining activities to relax themselves.
What is more, people now have better quality of living, which allow them to enjoy their lives without worries. In this changing world, one of the changes is the better condition of life, such as the medical improvement and sanitary. When people attain these basic needs, they become happier because they do not need to concern about anything. For example, better medical techniques make people happier. Now, with the medical techniques, people who have cancer can be cured. When they noticed that they are ill, they do not have to concern that the cancer will worsen. By contrast, people living in the past does not have these advanced techniques. Whenever people are ill, they may have to being greatly painful or even wait until death, which brings lots of conerns to people and makes them less happy. Thus, in my perspective, people now content to their lives because of the better quality of living.
By contrast, there is a popular concept that people now are less happy because there were less disturbing things, such as the messages from smartphones and the noise from television. Nevertheless, this fails to consider the fact that people now have those things to get information from others, which makes people have broader view of things. This allows people to have a greater understanding of things and improve their lives. Once their lives are improved, they will be happier. As a result, it is hard to convince people of this idea.
With the reasons mentioned above, I firmly hold the view that people are not less happy with lives than people were in the past. That is not to say that other points of view are completely without merits. Still, the reasons I provided in favor of my position are much stronger.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. 73
- Universities should require every graduation student to take public speaking courses. 70
- TPO 31 73
- TPO 31 3
- TPO46 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, i think, such as, as a result, first of all, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2454.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94758064516 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54017856735 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.433467741935 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 739.8 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0519841636 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3846153846 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26923076923 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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