TPO-31- Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past Use specific reasons and examples to
our life has been reshaped by technology in more than one ways which has positive effect on our life. From my perspective, these days people are happier than before for a couple of reasons which be explained in the following.
Firstly, thanks to technology people in the vast majority of the world easily receive health care services compared to the twentieth century.family: As a result, the mortality rate has been increased dramatically and people are more healthier than before. Thus, people hardly loss their families and are happier than before. The statistics in Iran illustrates that, the mortality rate at the end of 2018 has been declined 50 % compared to the 50 years ago.
Secondly, people are more satisfied than before, Because technology provides ample services for them. For example ,fast traveling services is one of the significant services which hopefully have improved people life’s. According to information which is on the net, traveling in the past was really time consuming and dangerous. however, these days people can travel safely and quickly by airplane or other services.
Finally, the technology have had a great impact on the communication of people which have a direct effect on the peoples satisfaction. For example, people in the past had many problems to easily communicate with their families. however, nowadays people by social networks not only can connect with their family in other parts of the world, but also can find new friends from different cultures.
In conclusion, although technology can create some problems for people, For those reasons, I believe that people are happier or more satisfied with their lives than in the past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Our
our life has been reshaped by technology in...
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Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one way', 'a way', or simply 'ways'?
Suggestion: one way; a way; ways
...een reshaped by technology in more than one ways which has positive effect on our life. ...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
...n increased dramatically and people are more healthier than before. Thus, people hardly loss t...
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...des ample services for them. For example ,fast traveling services is one of the si...
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Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...as really time consuming and dangerous. however, these days people can travel safely an...
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...eople which have a direct effect on the peoples satisfaction. For example, people in th...
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Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...easily communicate with their families. however, nowadays people by social networks not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 271.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25830258303 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73697124027 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557195571956 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8450801948 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.615384615 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 5.45110844103 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214964201327 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858545635278 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514440640282 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128558957788 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417788887204 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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