Tpo23
In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
In today's modern life, there always has been an controversial topic among people about the notion of whether people should care about quality of a product or quantity of that. In this regard, some people are of the opinion that people should work slowly to avoid mistakes. However, I personally subscribe to the view that people should risk and work as quickly as they can. In the following paragraphs, my reasons will be elaborated on this issue in more detail.
To begin with, people should take lots of risks because having an innovative idea plays a crucial role in the progress of life. Generally speaking, our world is in a rush. people should accomplish a novel idea when it comes in their mind since many people might already achieve this, and do it faster. An example drives this notion home. My uncle was manager of an international company. When he started to produce software products for computers, no one had reached his unique idea before he created it. Nevertheless, after one year many companies introduced similar software, but they could not be as popular as my uncle's production. Had he not been in a rush to introduce such apparatus, others would have been made it first.
Another reasons is that there are several applications and tools, which helps people to eliminate their mistakes. Therefore, people can take risks and reduce their mistakes at the same time. In fact, with the advent of technologies and the internet, people rely on them, which contributes to having products with higher quality. As a case in point, an in-depth study conducted by researchers indicates that a hefty majorities of employees in developed countries use online services such as Grammarly to correct their mistakes when they want to give their final projects to their bosses. All in all, the more technologies are advanced, the more people are able to work quickly, and decrease their mistakes.
Drawing upon the reasons that I mentioned above, I do believe that people should take risks, and fulfill a project quickly. Not only is an innovative idea precious, but also there are a wide range of high-tech devices which help people avoid mistakes, and possess a high quality product.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...days modern life, there always has been an controversial topic among people about ...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...rally speaking, our world is in a rush. people should accomplish a novel idea when it ...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
... been made it first. Another reasons is that there are several applications and...
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Line 5, column 416, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'majority'?
Suggestion: majority
...d by researchers indicates that a hefty majorities of employees in developed countries use...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9566395664 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58821350675 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579945799458 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4618126854 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2631578947 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4210526316 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0931552017295 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329874728409 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462293992819 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571077880135 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501066178739 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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