TPO31
For centuries, happiness has become the center of the people's attention. Some voice their believe that people today are more happy with their lives than people were in the past. However, personally, I side against with this opinion and believe that people now are more satisfied than before.
The satisfaction of people come from the quality of the life. It's commonly believe that the life become more comfortable and convenient than before due to the advent of the advanced technique. For instance, people nowadays can take a plane to wherever they want in just one day, while people in the past need more than one month to go somewhere in great distance. What's more, if your relative live far away from you, you can just call her or have a video talk, which otherwise you will miss her a lot in the past.
The additional happiness come from the novel ways to relieve their stress which the past people do not have. When you find a proper outlet to keep the pressure away from you, you will obtain the happiness. Nowadays, When people are stressed out, they can play some video game or watch a movie in the movie theater, which is a much more efficient way to wrap out your stress. In the past, before the advent of these electronic devices, the only thing you can do to entertain is to do some sport, which is effective to some extent but it will eventually make you tired.
Admittedly, some people may retort that nowadays people live in a fast lifestyle than before so that it will finally spread yourself too thin, which is true to a point. However this problem can be solved if you don't put too many things which more than you can handle on your plate. First, set a plan for what necessary thing must be done. And put aside those unnecessary things each day. Don’t let you be over-scheduled. Then take a break after finishing each things, which will give you enough motivation to do the next thing without feeling tedious. Thus, it’s up to you to choose what lifestyle you need, you can easily choose a happy life today.
To sum up, today people feel more happy than before. I concede that some people may live in a more tough world than before. However, if you find what you truly want and ignore other things, you can mangage fine nowadays.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
... happiness has become the center of the peoples attention. Some voice their believe tha...
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Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...the peoples attention. Some voice their believe that people today are more happy with t...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ople come from the quality of the life. Its commonly believe that the life become m...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...onth to go somewhere in great distance. Whats more, if your relative live far away fr...
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Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...elf too thin, which is true to a point. However this problem can be solved if you dont ...
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Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...wever this problem can be solved if you dont put too many things which more than you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, then, thus, while, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59852216749 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26251738788 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9181882167 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9047619048 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04761904762 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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