TPO31-2: Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Nowadays, world is steadily growing in many aspects. Technology, communications, science and so on are in developing. These booms include some advantages and some disadvantages. In my point of view, disadvantages have affected people's life more than advantages. I think people's life are leading toward dark life, which there is not any happiness in them. I want to explain my idea by following words.
One of the primary reasons is that one ways, which guarantees happy life, is emotional supporting. I believe that in the past people have more conjunction in their family, so, they used family's union power and were more satisfied. For example, my grandfather used to gather all the family in his home and they spent hopeful time with each other.
There is also a more subtle point we must consider. Nowadays, one of the biggest people's concern is money and finding job, whereas, in the past, people found their favor job easier than now. Todays, people's opinion is that money is equal with convenience and as a result happy life. Besides, they did not reach money easily, hence, they become depressed.
What is more, I would say one other thing, which, ensure the satisfying life, is healthy. Scientists’ stats show that people were healthier physically either mentally in compare with people who live in this world maybe because of their diet or life style. Being healthy is big gift from god and everybody should be grateful. For instance, my friend's mother has involved with cancer illness, all of the family members are worry and sad. Doctor had said to them source of this illness is bad diet, stress and hard work.
All in all, if all the factors are contemplated we can reach this conclusion that nowadays people are unhappy because they have more concerns than past, they encounter with more hard conditions into past and also they do not care of their health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one way', 'a way', or simply 'ways'?
Suggestion: one way; a way; ways
.... One of the primary reasons is that one ways, which guarantees happy life, is emotio...
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Line 7, column 397, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...other has involved with cancer illness, all of the family members are worry and sad. Docto...
^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'whereas', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'as a result', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237057220708 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.160762942779 0.158761421928 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0980926430518 0.0866891130778 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0408719346049 0.046263068375 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0681198910082 0.0685040099705 99% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114441416894 0.118717715034 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0272479564033 0.0351676179071 77% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5586974184 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00817438692098 0.0309702414327 26% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0599455040872 0.0887237588012 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0108991825613 0.0209618222197 52% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.016348773842 0.0139019557991 118% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1886.0 2387.08602151 79% => OK
No of words: 318.0 408.028673835 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93081761006 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.317610062893 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.232704402516 0.251872472559 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135220125786 0.174417080927 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0974842767296 0.112833075102 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5586974184 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61320754717 0.524397521467 117% => OK
Word variations: 70.7309067215 59.2087087015 119% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.7368421053 20.5533526081 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5120046064 48.84282405 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2631578947 120.699889404 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7368421053 20.5533526081 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.631578947368 0.644075263715 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 40.0072823568 45.7405998639 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.40404040404 1.45489161554 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316732147887 0.300154397459 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0620825736068 0.103427244359 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0643647050203 0.0752933317313 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.461646968786 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.164639510905 0.151897553556 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970312054376 0.114077575197 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809906148682 0.0781384742642 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.23666584348 0.336927656856 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0384930960212 0.067059652881 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196166880697 0.210909579961 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454256116846 0.0618886996521 73% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.