What are some of the qualities of good parent? Use specific details and examples to explain your answer.
"What makes one a good parent?", is a difficult question to answer to, because each generation has its own specific particularities, and often parents face many challenges. Because of the continuing evolution of various ideas, what was applicable to past generations is not available for the present one. From my point of view a parent should be both open-minded and supportive. I will explain my statement, in detail, in the following essay.
To begin with, a parent should be aware of the presents realities when educates his off-springs, even though these might not reflect the values he grow with. This aspect has a tremendous importance for the integration of the child in the society. Otherwise, the offspring might be ignored and outcast by the children of his own age. However, a good parent should pay attention to the positive and negative realities, and therefore, he has to advise his child whenever some facts that seem to be fashionable are not proper for a normal behavior. In the end, parents must be parents, not friends. My friend's experience is a compelling example of this. Back in high school, his parents used to allow him all the freedom in the world, to buy him fashionable clothes and to have a large entourage of friends. One day, he decided to have imprinted a tattoo, and he was sure that his parents would support him. Surprisingly, his parents were against to this and explained him the consequences of such an action. That very moment, my friend was angry with his folks, but a few years after he realized that they were right.
To continue with, a parent should be supportive when it comes for his child's dreams and passions. There are children who have innate talents and parents have the duty to identify and guide kids to develop them. It can be about music, sports, science, math and so forth. These activities are significant for the harmonious development of a child, improving his character traits such as responsibility, diligence, ambitiousness. Moreover, such talents can be vital for the future of a kid, being a good source for a prosperous career. For instance, my aforementioned friend, was very talented at singing opera. Both his parents and his teachers noticed this extraordinaire talent, and offered their support to help him to studying this field. As a result, he became better and better over the years, and now he has concerts all over the world.
To summarize, being a parent is a difficult job that requires qualities that fit to present times. A parent has to be open-minded due to the fact that a child's integration in the society is based on actual values. Being a supportive parents is also essential, because this might influence the future and the career of a child.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'grows'.
Suggestion: grows
...h these might not reflect the values he grow with. This aspect has a tremendous impo...
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Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'parent'?
Suggestion: parent
...ed on actual values. Being a supportive parents is also essential, because this might i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2283.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8991416309 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87266607745 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534334763948 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 702.9 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2633365877 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.32 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.64 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178393006104 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483284484715 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472829719671 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116785284899 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625672285541 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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