What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reason and exapmles to support your choice.
A Person can learn many skills, like technical skill, communication skill, writing skill, etc., in life to be successful. From all different skill I think communication skill is most important skill to be successful. Communication skill includes how effectively you can communicate with your costumers,your colleagues, your family and friends, also to strangers. There are several reasons why one has to good at communication in order to get success in professional as well as in personal life.
Firstly, Communication skill is helpful in every domains whether you are a doctor or a engineer or sales person or a bank manager. A good doctor is a person who has good knowledge of medical field as well as who can connect with his/her patient and can understand their pain. You can become a doctor by having knowledge of medical field but in order to become a good doctor you have to understand patients illness. With a good comminication skill you can understand easily what patients are talking about how they are going through that situations. An engineer has to present his ideas which are in their mind. He has to present ideas effectively so other can understand it. With good comminication skill he can explain effectively to his workers what they have to do or what is the point in doing that. So, from above example you can understand how communication skill is useful in professional life.
Secondly, Life is not about only your professional success. Personal life is as important as proffesional life. In personal life communication skill is the most important skill. Without communication how can you express your feelings to your friends and family? You have to show them you love them, understand them, you care for them. With good communication skill you can express these things and also understand their feelings also.
To sum up, a good communicator can understand other people, express himself/herself effectively. You can express your ideas, your feelings, your strategies, your emotions with good communication. It is a most important skill to get success in professinol as well as in personal life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , your
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Suggestion:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Suggestion:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, i think, talking about, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11494252874 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08767810992 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433908045977 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1455276031 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7619047619 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234107375049 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097856411388 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835648292331 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180207319229 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845540293506 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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