Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other activities up to such an extent that we think of them as a suicidal person. They are doing activities like sky diving, mountain climbing, surfing, bike stunting, racing, or even taking selfie on high building in dangerous pose where little mistake becomes life taking. Although, they are taking safety measurement but still it is far more dangerous in doing that type of things. I can think of several reasons why they are attracted to them.
Firstly, by doing dangerous activities we can get sense of thrill which we do not get in daily routine activities. Some people likes thrill so much that they get bored with day to day life doing routine activities. Not only some people, all people get bored with routine activities. So, we need change some time by doing things that we did not have done before, like we go in amusement park and ride dangerous rides. By doing that type of thing we get sense of living. By doing scary thing it arouse our senses that we do not get in our safe life.
Secondly, in the era of internet any one can see our activities. So, it is also an opportunity to show our masculinity by doing risky thing in videos and put it on internet. In the past also there was sports like bull fighting, to show your strength and courage in front of thousand people Other than that nowadays movies are also becoming more violent and thrilling that it is inspiring us to do things like that. Videogames are also thrilling that it inspire us to do that kind of things in real life.
In sum up, I can say people are attracted to dangerous activities to get sense of thrill, show off their masculinity and courage, and also inspired by movies and videogames to do thrilling and dangerous things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...untain climbing, surfing, bike stunting, racing, or even taking selfie on high bu...
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...sons why they are attracted to them. Firstly, by doing dangerous activities w...
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...outine activities. Not only some people, all people get bored with routine activi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60759493671 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45688670086 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487341772152 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1686706585 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0666666667 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255115851903 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992763052913 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747982420478 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168362374955 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742325728612 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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