When a new technological device becomes available, some people buy it right away; others wait until many have adopted it. Which view do you agree with?
Nowadays, the rapid change in science promotes the development of technological devices. Some people purchase the new techonology products right right away when they first are issued, while others buy them later. From where I stand, I do concur with the idea that getting the technological device when many have brought them for two reasons, which I will explore further in the following essay.
To begin with, people could save money by waiting to buy a new digital device. This is because the price of technological products changes quickly after being released, and therefore people who buy those device later could enjoy the economical benefit. My personal experience provides a compelling example. Last year, I urgently wanted to buy a new iPhone as I am a huge Apple fans. Therefore, I brought a new iPhone 14 as soon as it dropped in September to satifiy myself. However, I suprisingly found that the price of my phone decreased over 200 dollars after 3 month when I browsed a techo shopping website. At first, I felt regreted for the disparity in price. But after that , I realized that this change, in fact, based on the market rule: the price goes down when more people meet their need.
Had if I have not brought the phone right away, I could have saved more moeny.
Moreover, buying technological products till others have owned that could make people evaluate the device in all around way as there are many using experience available for people to go through. In this information world, it is easy for people to share or borrow the experince of using products by social platform, which could help customers to understand the peoducts better and then make the right decision. For example, I would seek some information on online everytime I want to purchase a technological products. There are a enormous amount of information about the characteristics or pros and cons of the digital device writen by people have brought it. Contrarily, few information is available as soon as the products dropped. Therefore, it is difficult for me to know the true user experience and I probably make a bad choose.
In sum, I agree that it is better for people to wait to buy a new technological products till many people have owned it due to the more reasonable price and the careful evaluation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: right
...e purchase the new techonology products right right away when they first are issued, while ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this device' or 'those devices'?
Suggestion: this device; those devices
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...vides a compelling example. Last year, I urgently wanted to buy a new iPhone as I...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...hone decreased over 200 dollars after 3 month when I browsed a techo shopping website...
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Line 6, column 509, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'product'?
Suggestion: product
...time I want to purchase a technological products. There are a enormous amount of informa...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
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Suggestion: much; little
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Suggestion: little information
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Suggestion: product
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86259541985 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73605120403 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529262086514 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4053178096 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.578947368 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6842105263 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35967175685 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989775985724 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866607827268 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213224840157 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738626479907 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.