When you looking for a job, which of the following ways would you choose?
1) Ask all your friends if they know any vacancy
2) submit your resume to companies
3) look on line or newspaper
Personally, I would choose to ask my friends if they know any vacancy when I was searching for a job. My reasons are as follows.
To begin with, I focus on efficiency a lot, and asking my friends if they know any vacancy can help me save a great deal of time. For instance, when I was studying in the university, I asked my friend Todd if he knew any software company that was hiring interns, and he replied me in less than a day that MTC, a prestigious IT company, was looking for college students who were fluent in Python and PHP programming language. Moreover, since I was extremely proficient in PHP, it seems that my managers like me a lot, and eventually, I got a part-time job in less than two weeks. Nonetheless, my sister submitted her resume to An-Hua Technology, so she spent nearly three months preparing for the resume and interview. Evidently, asking my friends for job vacancies can help me save a significant amount of time.
In addition, I place an emphasis on reputation, and asking my friends if they know any job opportunity can help me get a good image. To elaborate, take my friend Jammy as an example. Two years ago, Jammy asked me whether my father's financial company was looking for accountants, and I told my father that he was an extremely diligent and intelligent person. Consequently, my father had a great impression on him, and eventually he allowed Jammy to work in his organization. Nonetheless, my friend Jane submitted a resume to a financial technology company, but she got rejected. This is because she looked extremely ugly, so her interviewers had a terrible first impression on her. Clearly, asking friends for vacancies can help me procure a favorable reputation.
Last but not least, I care about honesty a lot, and asking my friends whether a company is hiring can help me make sure that I was not deceived. To be more specific, I once participated in an IT company called IMTC by looking on 1111 career search, which is a website that hosts several job vacancies. The reason why I picked this organization is that in the contract, it clearly stated that I did not need to work on weekends, and it promised me that I was only required to work 5 hours a day. However, it turned out that they did guarantee me those benefits. In other words, I was deceived by the company. Nevertheless, my cousin asked my friend Kate whether there was a career opportunity in IMTC, and she dissuaded my cousin and told him my misfortunes. Thus, it is obvious that asking friends whether there was a job opportunity can stop me from getting into a dishonest company.
In conclusion, I believe that asking my friends if they know any job vacancy is the best way to find a job, this is because I care about efficiency, reputation, as well as honesty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
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Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...e more specific, I once participated in an IT company called IMTC by looking on 1111 ...
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Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
... specific, I once participated in an IT company called IMTC by looking on 1111 career s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 90.0 43.0788530466 209% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2291.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 495.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62828282828 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84665031547 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464646464646 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 726.3 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9927500101 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.136363636 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22727272727 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232939329122 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863164731797 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797099315124 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186803302802 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593508555407 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.