When you make a purchase, which of the following will affect your
decision? 1. suggestions from friends 2.media (advertisements from TV,
magazines) 3. Recommendations from salesperson 4. On your own
When being asked who I should ask when I am going to make a purchase, the response must be a boilerplate answer, to ask my friends. In my opinion, this demonstrates how our peers play a key role while we make decisions. I would like to provide several reasons to substantiate my statement.
First of all, the major reason for my propensity is that friends always provide with the most professional information. In fact, nowadays, people are extremely specialized in their own field, thus, while we encounter a difficult choice, our prominent friends can always give us the most professional advice. Take my friend, Jack, as an example. As a formal technician of world-famous high-tech industry, he is good at manufacturing any forms of electronics, such as televisions and computers. Last week, when I tried to find a new television which is going to be installed in my new house, he had been the one who analyzing every kind of televisions for me. Thanks to his help, I could find the most economical and suitable television in just one hour. Therefore, my friends are credited with the experts who can always direct me to buy the most suitable product efficiently.
Secondly, friends are considered to be the ones who know my needs most. Actually, as a social person, I have spent a lot of time with friends. As a result, they can always provide me with advises based on their understanding of me. To illustrate such argument, my best friend, Ivy, can be cited as an instance. Last Christmas, when I was fascinated by the glowing decorations in the furniture store, trying to buy one of them to enrich my house. She recommended me to buy a cheapest Christmas tree in the store since I had told her that I have to save my money for an upcoming concert of my favorite singer. Clearly, a friend like Ivy, who has engaged in my life so deeply, can always advise me objectively. In consequence, asking friends for recommendations enable me to look beyond my point of view, and thus make the smartest decisions possible.
To conclude, even though some sophisticated may think it is not necessary to ask someone for help whole purchasing, I ponder it is not wise to buy something without others’ aids since purchasing is always related to professional fields and subjective views. That is to say, I believe it is friends that make wise purchasing possible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 473, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ich my house. She recommended me to buy a cheapest Christmas tree in the store si...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, in fact, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78973105134 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97567568389 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557457212714 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5372140111 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.95 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.45 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0775316822431 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278043698495 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249834350292 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0509818340151 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128989176584 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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