Which do you think is preferable: shopping at big store or several small stores?
In today's modern world, mega malls and chain shops establish in a galloping rate. People are spending billion dollars to purchase their needs from there stores. Due to differences in personality and characteristics, individuals have various behaviors in their shopping. Some people prefer to visit several small store to buy their purchase, while others try to buy from a big store. I , for one , subscribe to the former group based on quite a few reasons, three conspicuous ones of which have been elaborated upon in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, in light of competition in market, shop owners tend to attract consumers in different ways in which some of them offer great discount for their products, provide proper customer service, or considering some privileges for customers. For example, at the end of each season, stores sale their previous costly clothes affordable. In other words, the more stores one visits, the more economical goods he or she can buy. However, if people purchase their needs from a single big shop, they would deprive of various types of discounts.
Additionally, by visiting several stores, people may have various choices. As far as different options is are concerned, some big shops only provide the products of a special brand exclusively. In contrast, small stores usually do not limit themselves for only one particular brand. An old proverb states,"the bird which flies far away can forage better", with this in mind, it is better to visit small stores rather than buying from a big shops. Moreover, spending time on malls give us better feelings. Indeed, not only does visiting several small shops give wide spectrum of choices, but it can engage us in many luxurious and beautiful stores.
Eventually, economy will gain benefit from the customer's behaviors in which people buy their goods from several different small stores, since small stores usually endure heavy financial pressure because of big stores which have strong financial background. As a result, buying form these small stores lead to their survival and improvement of their performance in attracting more customers.
All in all, the accuracy of this assessment varies from person to person based on characteristics. At the same time, the virtue of buying from several small stores outweigh purchasing from a big store on the grounds that it brings about possibility of buying products in affordable fashion, a lot if choices, and economic advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in contrast, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2088.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24623115578 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79778483805 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56783919598 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2296532771 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.894736842 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9473684211 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32427983003 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970740405742 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849887981829 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199379089161 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395869551296 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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