which is the event exerting the biggest influence on your country?
Vietnam is my motherland, which is a picturesque and dynamic country. However, its present appearance cannot be achieved without occurrence of several events. Many Vietnamese appreciate the importance of our victories against two giant countries in the 20th century. However, I consider the reform in 1986 as the one that has a major effect in my country and will support my view by reasons and examples in this essay.First and foremost, the reform changed people lives thanks to the opportunities it gave. In fact, before 1986, Vietnam was a publicly state- owned economy, and private sector was prohibited. In addition, the government ensured people’s lives thanks to providing all the products they need by using its distributing system. However, the problem was that the distribution based on the equal rule, while people’s demand was dissimilar. Consequently, the provided goods was not enough for a number of people to handle their lives. Fortunately, in 1986, the government decided to make a transition from a highly centralized planned economy to a socialist-oriented market economy, which recognized more than one business sector, including business ran by people. Therefore, this policy made people’s increase, so they did not have to suffer from as numerous difficulties as they did before. Furthermore, giving people that chances, the government could have more time to face other problems, such as medical, education, etc…Second, the reform made Vietnam closer to other countries. The policy allowed an “opened” country, which is suitable for foreign investments or co-operated projects. As a result, there have been more jobs for people, and the appearance of our country also changed because of many mordern buildings or skycrapers. Furthermore, private companies’ demands of having good employees led to opportunities for Vietnamese students to study abroad. Take myself as an example. I am preparing for the TOEFL test to be eligible to study abroad. If I was a student in the 1980s, it may be impossible for me to do that. In conclusion, I appreciate the government’s decision on facilitating transformation in 1986. Although many people may have other choices, I still strongly believe that the reform make people’s lives brighter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'appreciates'.
Suggestion: appreciates
...ence of several events. Many Vietnamese appreciate the importance of our victories against...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: First
...w by reasons and examples in this essay.First and foremost, the reform changed people...
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Message: You used an adverb ('publicly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('state') instead of another adjective.
...gave. In fact, before 1986, Vietnam was a publicly state- owned economy, and private sector was ...
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Suggestion:
...y did before. Furthermore, giving people that chances, the government could have ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Second
...oblems, such as medical, education, etc…Second, the reform made Vietnam closer to othe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...form make people's lives brighter.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4676056338 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30779558087 2.67179642975 124% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583098591549 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4651051425 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.157894737 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6842105263 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26315789474 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0498656943896 0.236089414692 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.016231570308 0.076458572812 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251433910145 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0498656943896 0.150856017488 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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