Which one of the factors do you think is the most important in terms of affecting the friendship?
1. always help each other
2. have same interests and views on important things
3. trust each other completely
Undoubtedly, friendship has a significant role in people's daily lives in many of the places where they work or play. Some people think that having the same opinions on important matters and completely trusting each other is important in maintaining a good friendship, while others do not believe so. If I were asked to choose one, I would say that helping each other is the most important value for having sound relationships with friends. There are several reasons as follows.
First of all, helping friends allows people to obtain trust and emotional bonding with friends. Commonly in society, people who receive help from others tend to trust the other and have a tendency to have a better feeling emotionally. Trust and bonding play key factor that affects friendship. For example, one of my friends, Moonsoo who lives in a distant province lost his father and his grandparents. Every time he had difficulty, I visited him by taking buses and trains. Even though it took me more than seven hours in one way, I managed to visit him to help. I did my best to help him all the time by giving him some money for the funerals and doing some rituals together. Even though we have different views on political things, we can say that we are best friends as always. If I had not helped him constantly, we would not have had such a strong friendship.
In addition, people can improve their friendship even though they have different ideas on important matters and completely do not trust each other. Moonsoo, mentioned in the above paragraph, has a different opinion on politics because he is more favor of the rightwing party while I am not. Once, he told me a lie about his family by introducing his stepfather as his biological father to me. But I really don't care about them in our friendship because I understand his positions. Moreover, he always helps me back when I had some important events in my life such as my marriage. He came to my marriage and sang a song to celebrate the event. I appreciate it a lot. As my experience shows that in friendship, there is nothing more important than helping each other always.
All things considered, the importance of helping each other anytime far outweigh those of having the same views and trusting each other completely in having a good relationship with friends. All in all, the influence of receiving and giving help cannot be overestimated in friendship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
... we can say that we are best friends as always. If I had not helped him constantly, we...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...s biological father to me. But I really dont care about them in our friendship becau...
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
... more important than helping each other always. All things considered, the importan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, really, so, while, for example, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78229665072 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70769963717 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50956937799 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0096396702 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9130434783 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1739130435 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41665015866 0.236089414692 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112788946388 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137913652171 0.0737576698707 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294189197368 0.150856017488 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103448121737 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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