Which one of the following do you think is the best way to get to know a city in a limited amount of time when you first visit it?
-touring historic sites
-going to markets or shops
-eating in restaurant and spending time in cafes
People usually possess different views on how to know more about a city when they only have a little time. Some people would suggest visiting a historic building, others would recommend going to the markets, the other would say that eating in the local restaurant. In my opinion, if I first visit some cities that I had never been to, I would probably visit their local restaurants.
First of all, I am busy which means if I go to an unfamiliar city, I would possibly go there for work. To be more specific, eating in a restaurant or drinking coffee in cafes will not spend too much time, and also I can taste extraordinary food and exotic cuisines. By doing that, I can fully understand a city in a short time, and I feel that I have a deep connection with this city. Hence, I do not have free time to visit some historic sites because it requires me to spend a lot of time having a tourist.
Secondly, I am lazy and I do not want to put lots of effort into scheduling the tour in a limited amount of time, and if I visit a city by eating in their restaurants, I would save many efforts. To elaborate, when I visit a city, I usually like to take a walk or hang out without planning. That is, if I go into a café, I could only pick a cup of coffee, or grab a piece of cake, then sit in the shop to see cars and passengers pass through from my sight without putting any effort into it. However, if I go to markets, I have to list down all the shops and items that I would like to buy, and it will make me feel tired.
Last but not least, visiting a city by having a coffee or a cake cost really cheap, and it is the best option for me to know a city because I am poor. Generally, visiting a city from eating or having a meal cost only 10 US dollars, but going to the market or shop in the markets usually spend more than 20 US dollars. For me, it is the cheapest way to know a city by eating in their restaurant, and also is the fastest way to get in touch with the city.
In conclusion, from what I had been discussed above, I strongly contend that the best way to visit a city in a limited of time is to eat in a restaurant. After all, since I am busy, lazy, and poor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, after all, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.04618937644 4.8611393121 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34840162936 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468822170901 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.252399843 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0625 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352962481279 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111084022469 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605087120558 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191510839656 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434707469953 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.51 10.9000537634 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.