Which one of the following do you think is the best way to get to know a city in a limited amount of time when you first visit it?
-touring historic sites
-going to markets or shops
-eating in restaurant and spending time in cafes
People usually possess different views on how to know more about a city when they only have a few time. Some people would suggest to visit a historic buildings, others would recommend to go to the markets, the other would say that eating in the local restaurant. In my opinion, if I first visit some cities that I had never been, I would probably visit their local restaurants.
First of all, I am busy which means if I go to a unfamiliar city, I would possibly go there for working. To be more specific, eating in a restaurant or drinking coffee in cafes will not spend to much time, and also I can taste a extraordinary food and exotic cusines. By doing that, I can fully understand a city in a short time, and I feel that I have a deep conection with this city. Hence, I do not have free time to visit some historic sites because it requires me to spend a lot of time on having a tourist.
Secondly, I am lazy and I do not want to put lots of efforts on scheduling the tour in a limited amount of time, and if I visit a city by eating in their restaurants, I would save many efforts. To elaborate, when I visit a city, I usually like to take a walk, or hang out without planning. That is, if I go into a café, I could only pick a cup of coffee, or grab a piece of cake, then sitting in the shop to see cars and passangers pass through from my sight without putting any efforts on it. However, if I go to markets, I have to list down all the shops and items that I would like to buy, and it will make me feel tired.
Last but not least, visiting a city by having a coffee or a cake cost really cheap, and it is the best option for me to know a city because I am poor. Generally, visiting a city from eating or having a meal cost only 10 US dollars, but go to the market or shop in the markets usually spend more than 20 US dollars. For me, it is the cheapest way to know a city by eating in their restaurant, and also is the fastest way to get in touch with the city.
In conclusion, from what I had been discussed above, I strong contend that the best way to visit a city in a limited of time is to eat in a restaurant. After all, since I am busy, lazy, and poor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
...more about a city when they only have a few time. Some people would suggest to visit a h...
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Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest visiting'.
Suggestion: suggest visiting
...only have a few time. Some people would suggest to visit a historic buildings, others would reco...
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Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'building'?
Suggestion: building
...eople would suggest to visit a historic buildings, others would recommend to go to the ma...
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Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend going', 'recommend gonna'.
Suggestion: recommend going; recommend gonna
...isit a historic buildings, others would recommend to go to the markets, the other would say tha...
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Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...f all, I am busy which means if I go to a unfamiliar city, I would possibly go th...
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Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...drinking coffee in cafes will not spend to much time, and also I can taste a extra...
^^
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...pend to much time, and also I can taste a extraordinary food and exotic cusines. ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, after all, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.00458715596 4.8611393121 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35857446257 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45871559633 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.3723533289 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.125 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356132047449 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112214668375 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060864990682 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193859040213 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433320401207 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.22 10.9000537634 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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