Which one of the following values is the most important to share with a young child(5-10 years old)?
1.being helpful
۲٫Being honest
۳٫Being well organized
Today, how to raise children perfectly, is the most important question that every parent asks. Thus, all parents prefer to have a helpful, honest and well-organized child. However, there is a lot of debate about which one is more important. I believe honesty is the most important value that all humans include children should have because being honest help to have a better and healthier society. Moreover, being honest leads to have no stress of revealing your secrets. I will illustrate my reasons in the following paragraphs.
First, honesty help to have a better society in which people have a better relationship and trust each other. Indeed, if we have a perfect honest society, there would be no guilt anymore because honesty doesn’t allow people to steal things from each other or cheat on an exam, etc. Thus, honesty help to have a healthier society. For example, I remember when I was a child, my father didn’t lock the car never because although he didn’t know all the people of our city personally, he trusted society. Hence, he was sure that anyone would not steal the car. On the contrary, today, he always advises us to be careful about our staff. Thus, honesty, unlike well organizing which mostly brings personal benefits, is a value that is more helpful for having a healthier society.
Second, revealing lies and secrets make all people stressful. In other words, when you lie about an issue to somebody, you will always have the stress of revealing your stress which will increase relatively by making bigger lies. Thus, contrary to the two other values which may help in reducing your stresses, lack of honesty may lead to very big stress which any other value cannot be helpful for you. For example, once, we have a mathematics course in which our teacher asks to show him our assignments. Hence, all the students gave their reports to the teacher except for two. Hence, one of them apologized teacher and explain the reason for which he had not done the assignment. While, the other one, although he had not done the assignment, he claimed he forgot to bring his report to school. Thus, the teacher called the student’s parent and ask them to bring his assignment. Therefore, he started to shake and his face became red because his lie was revealing.
Based on the aforementioned reasons, being honest is the most important value that every child should learn during his childhood.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, except for, for example, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91019417476 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55861970245 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5531181226 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9565217391 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9130434783 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08695652174 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245481392687 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754729820904 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758520477708 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201684061688 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826938534549 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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