TPO 40
The lecture and the passage discuss the possibility of human presence on Venus. The passage states that contrary to mars and moon it is impossible that humans maintain present on Venus. whereas, the professor in the lecture disagrees with the reading reasons and believes humans can maintain present on Venus.
First, the reading believes as a result of the high pressure of the atmosphere on the surface of Venus, spacecraft would have been crushed. However, the professor argued against this idea and mentioned a physical concept that is about the decrease of the pressure with an increase of height. Hence, people can solve this problem by increasing their height to the surface of Venus. Actually, in the height of 15 km from the Venus surface, they could have the same pressure of the earth.
Second, the passage claims that there is no water source on Venus and moreover, the planet's atmosphere made up mostly of Carbone dioxide, Nitrogen, and sulfuric acid. However, the lecture believes by using a chemical process, people can make water with these materials. As a result, they can produce the required water.
Finally, the reading stated that the sunlight that can reach the surface will be so little because of a heavy cloud of carbon dioxide around the surface of the planet. As a result, people can't use their solar power cells and consequently, they can't use their machines and equipment. However, the lecturer believes although there is a dense layer of CO2 around Venus, it isn't much thick in the height of 15 km. Also, they can use both direct sunlight and reflected light to produce power that they need for their machines.
Although the reading denies the possibility of maintaining the presence of humans on Venus, the lecture disagrees and believes it is completely possible by illustrating his reasons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
... that humans maintain present on Venus. whereas, the professor in the lecture disagrees...
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Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'planets'' or 'planet's'?
Suggestion: planets'; planet's
...water source on Venus and moreover, the planets atmosphere made up mostly of Carbone di...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...face of the planet. As a result, people cant use their solar power cells and consequ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 245, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...olar power cells and consequently, they cant use their machines and equipment. Howev...
^^^^
Line 7, column 371, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...s a dense layer of CO2 around Venus, it isnt much thick in the height of 15 km. Also...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, consequently, finally, first, hence, however, moreover, second, so, whereas, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1373.03311258 111% => OK
No of words: 305.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01639344262 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49830902231 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491803278689 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7172707581 49.2860985944 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 110.228320801 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06452816374 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360877731897 0.272083759551 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124807014035 0.0996497079465 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581990747197 0.0662205650399 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190196134783 0.162205337803 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398884078098 0.0443174109184 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.3589403974 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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