Which one is the most important factor to help you work productively?
1. Having an environment free of noise and distractions;
2. Knowing that you will receive a reward;
3. Doing something you are interested in.
There is no doubt that every human does something interested in everyone. Individuals can solve the problem to achive success in the work. In this essay, we describe a couple of reasons for something to satisfy people to have good results in their job.
These days many people have excellent efficiency in their goal of setting a good target. By explanation, one of the crucial things is exerting in a positive effect on every people in his/her job knowing about the result of work. As a result, we understand the problem of gaining a high level, which is valuable can be done by struggling for a golden opportunity in life. For instance, athletes, most of the time, have tremendous activities for having good shape before the competition. However, sometimes the range of setbacks may cause reduce hope. In conclusion, knowing the result and having goals is very important for peers in every kind of works.
It seems that experts believe that positive energy should help us with high efficiency in our job. To support this idea, it is better to say that optimistic people neglect the problem in their job. Also, they have a sad problem like a brilliant key for them to be delighted and be motivated force for them. Nonetheless, lack of facilities shows can play a negative role for optimistic people, varieties of help can come to fill the gap of this shortage. So, I believe that we have to have a good vision for ourselves.
Another thing that can improve the result of the job is that some community correctly guide us. Some tribes of the peer can transfer some experiences in our mind before doing something. Besides, a relationship makes an active context for people. In other words, teamwork is an essential thing in some considerable projects. For example, at MIT university, 80% of experts attend the international project of brain computing. These groups consist of a majority of Ph.D. and master students who have an intelligent mind to do cutting-edge projects. In general, the team working on the success factor for people.
In conclusion, three factors as having positive energy, teamwork, set a target is a significant elements for us. Psychologists will have proved this fact in the next decades.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'does'' or 'doe's'?
Suggestion: does'; doe's
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'element'?
Suggestion: element
...teamwork, set a target is a significant elements for us. Psychologists will have proved ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e proved this fact in the next decades.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, another thing, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, kind of, no doubt, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92021276596 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7521134724 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55585106383 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3735704331 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.4347826087 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.347826087 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17391304348 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128975941739 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401192024229 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273956238042 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790305637464 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186251068835 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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