Nowadays, different people have various inclinations on work modes. Some individuals choose to work much more longer every day than normal to get better income in return, while others prefer to work for less hours. In my opinion, I would definitely choose to work eigth hours a day and get a averagy salary, because this allow me to work more efficiently, stay healthy, and have a good life quality.
The most important reason for choosing a job with reletively shorter work time is that eight hours work per day is appropriate to guarantee work effiency. The most important thing is not working for as long time as possible, but is finishing as much tasks as I can in comparatively short time. to take myself as an exmaple, When I was in my first year in the university, to prepare for final exams, I studied for even more than ten hours a day. However, I actually cannot keep concentrated for such long time, and thus felt tired constantly and could learn little knowledge every day. Then in the second year, I chose to study just seven hours a day for exams. I always had high effiency and remember those key points much longer, and got better grades than the first year was. Therefore, shorter work time always brings me better efficiency.
Moreover, another reason is that I can maintain physical and mental healthy in this case,since I have plenty of time to excersice and relax myself. To be more spesific, it allows me to form the habit of doing sports after diner every day, which is beneficial to my muscles and immune system. As a result, I become energetic and am less like get sick. In addition, every day I have several hours to compny with my family, such as cooking a delicious dinner, palying with my children and communicate with family members. Through this, I would easily forget about troubles and stress frm my work.
Admittedly, if I choose to work for longer time in order to get a better salary, I could earn more money and offord expensive products, which seems improve my life quality. Ironically, considering I have less my own time, I would definitely have a worse experience. I have to divert more engergy and time into work and have little time to what I want, like no time to take a vacation, stay with my family or dive into my interest, which absolutely negatively influence my life qualiy. Meanwhile, work costing too much energy means that I am likely be very tired, and thus I cannot enjoy my few free time well and just want to lie on the bed and rest. In the contrast, I will be able to have enough energy to enjoy my life through work life balance.
In conclusion, I would definitely choose to spend normal amount of time on work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'longer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: longer
...s. Some individuals choose to work much more longer every day than normal to get better inc...
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Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
...return, while others prefer to work for less hours. In my opinion, I would definitely choo...
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Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...return, while others prefer to work for less hours. In my opinion, I would definitel...
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Line 1, column 291, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...hoose to work eigth hours a day and get a averagy salary, because this allow me t...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...g time as possible, but is finishing as much tasks as I can in comparatively short t...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...s as I can in comparatively short time. to take myself as an exmaple, When I was i...
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Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , since
...physical and mental healthy in this case,since I have plenty of time to excersice and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2204.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6012526096 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49824359394 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509394572025 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 715.5 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4093512246 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.952380952 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8095238095 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17284051529 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595614843494 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058737695144 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116757566603 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283457425631 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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