why people remember their gifts?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
There are many reasons for why people re...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r their gifts take different people. Gifts are special kind of materials. The...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...l, these are maybe kiss, important words , sentences. Some type of smiling are be ...
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...iling are be gifts for upset people. Gifts used in different times and situat...
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Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n succeeded of students received gifts. Some people give each other to gifts especia...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...r love. Birthdays are much special than some of the gifts times, people receive any kind of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, then, in conclusion, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 43.0788530466 14% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 52.1666666667 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 1977.66487455 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 151.0 407.700716846 37% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33774834437 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 4.48103885553 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60545420618 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 212.727598566 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668874172185 0.524837075471 127% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 618.680645161 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9199003102 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.1666666667 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5833333333 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435517926842 0.236089414692 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156118596113 0.076458572812 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139772401069 0.0737576698707 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296028530859 0.150856017488 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153554955106 0.0645574589148 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.8 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 86.8835125448 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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