Why people visit museums?
Independent essay
Museums play an important role for the country culture and history. Museums help country to be known by people from other corners of the world. Many people visit museums when they travel to a new place. Personally, I believe that most, if not all, people like to visit museums. I feel this way because of three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all it is logical that people visit museums to learn a lot of much information about country culture and history. Today every town tries to open their national museums to demonstrate their past, what tools were used, what were created in their past or to show ruins of kings castles. Opinions may vary , but it is connected to native people traditions. For example when I had been to Egypt, I visited to a museum of a city Luxor. In their museum are demonstrated old Egypt people traditional clothes, carvings, old tools and so on. This vacation was very interesting, in spite of the fact that Egypt history has a lot of undiscovered things up to now.
Secondly visiting museums gives us a good opportunity to make new friends. In museums we can communicate with tourists, who came from other countries. For example in Egypt, during my great vacation I had a chance to communicate with international people. We chat to each other about what we hear and what we see. After it we had a cup of coffee and we also exchanged our telephone numbers. This was a nice experience and that’s why it is also wonderful to visit museums.
Thirdly, museums can interest every person. I do not think that museums can be boring for people. They by all means can find something very important and interesting, because ancient history and culture is really amazing. People who come whit their child can’t be worried about their child, because even a child can concentrate on culture and this will be astonishing for him, and this can be useful for parents and they can enjoy their vacation. I tell this from my memories.
In conclusion I am of the opinion that visiting museums can give you a lot of good feelings and moments, beside the information about country culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78779840849 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6166000535 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525198938992 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5085546637 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4782608696 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3913043478 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82608695652 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345253723133 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10796203419 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985175640951 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197204355722 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992050579679 0.0645574589148 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.