Workers are more satisfied when they have many different tasks to do during the workday than they do similar tasks all day long.
Nowadays, we have different jobs with different characteristics some of them are more active with a variety of tasks to do, however, others are sedentary jobs and employees ought to sit in the same place and do the same job all day. Some people like to work in an occupation with various duties and do not like to have the same days, while others prefer to do the same activity all day and run away from facing different challenges. Personally, I prefer the first point of view. Among numerous reasons, which can vindicate my viewpoint,I will mention the two most conspicuous ones through the following paragraphs.
The first reason that juts out of my mind immediately pondering this issue is the fact that most of mankind be attached to jobs which give them adventure life, different from day to day, they do not like to do the same work every day and think it is really boring. In my opinion, we live once and it is ridiculous to spend all our lives on the same job it is exactly the meaning of boring life. repetitive life makes people depress since individuals spend almost 8 hours at the work office, it is crystal clear that this type of jobs causes serious emotional illness. My father’s cousin worked as a typist in a company, his job was to type the same letter for almost 15 years, and this career made him an introverted person. When he went to see a doctor he told him it was only because of his job type. After that, he changes his job immediately and he has been better since he starts his new job as a journalist, counterpoint of his former job.
Secondly, I think we do not learn only at university and we ought to learn new things during our life by experiencing new situations. The best solution for this matter is to have a job which gives you new experiences every day so you can learn from it a lot of lessons. The more you do various duties in different situations, the more you gain your knowledge. A few years ago, in a science magazine in my country, which was Elmo Farhang magazin, there was research about this topic and the results show that people learn most of their knowledge from their work-life rather than their university times. I have the same memory about this topic when I studied my lectures at the university I do not know why I am learning this courses I could not feel it, but since I went to a company and started my career I faced with different problems it lead me to study that topic from books and I can learn it in the best way. So in my point of view, we ought to do a job that challenges us with different tasks to help us gain our knowledge.
To make a long story short, based on the aforementioned arguments, we may draw the conclusion that it is great to work in an atmosphere, not only does give you various situation to learn new lessons but also helps you to not feel bored in your job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, while, as to, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2328.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 530.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39245283019 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51543048611 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471698113208 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 733.5 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.6358172963 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.941176471 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1764705882 20.6045352989 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196125034786 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064773749365 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717857813631 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113627675435 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071741407291 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 58.1214874552 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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