Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
People have different views about which group enjoys their lives more, the young or old people? While some ague the old people are more likely to enjoy their lives for some reasons such as more wisdom, I believe the young people enjoy more because they are healthier, they have less responsibilities, and they have not tolerated loss of their dear ones.
One of the primary causes is, roughly speaking, young people are healthier than older people. Usually older people afflict several kinds of illnesses. All of their organs are suffering a multitude of pains. My grand mother in her last years of life, had two eye surgeries, at last, afflicted dementia which was a very annoying malady. She got lost a couple of times, in fact. Because young people are healthier, they can be more active. They can exercise regularly, or they can participate in parties. To a typical old person, movement is difficult, hence, they are usually reluctant to participate in such programs.
Another aspect to postulate is elderly people have more obligations in their lives. One field older people carry responsibility in it is their family. Usually an old person serves either as a mother or as a father for several children. They should ruminate devising plans about the youngster's future, if their offsprings are not independent yet, they should fulfill their current requirements e.g. the expenses of university, housing, renting a car, and so on. Another realm the older people carry its onerous duty is career. Commonly, any parent possesses a vocation, and he/she should be accountable with respect to both his/her boss and clients. All of these considerations get an old person to tolerate more stresses. A typical old person is always preoccupied with thoughts about his work. The consternation precludes merriment.
What is more, older people usually have lost some of their dears. Inevitably, as someone lives more, he would be more likely to lose his relatives like parents. This is a unique lament for a person to lose his/her parents. The main reason is all of us are accustomed to our parents, and have been with them from the very beginning. By getting old, a person will experience losses of a lot of his dear ones, gradually, he becomes more depressed.
In conclusion, although some may argue the elderly people are more delighted in their lives, I, personally, postulate the young people are more ebullient since they enjoy a healthier life, less duties, and less lack of loved people.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00240963855 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6566043766 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532530120482 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.8216296845 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.04 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372377139968 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10864090202 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123696257106 0.0737576698707 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238604003457 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866084798373 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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