Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
There are several considerations or factors for young people and old ones to enjoy their life. Some people believe old people would know more than younger ones so that they could know how to enjoy life. In my belief, young people are definitely able to enjoy life more than older people.
Young people tend to attend more activities than older do. Because they have more energy and healthier body. The activities they join, their intense could be higher than older people. For example, swimming across the ocean, climbing another mountain, seeing a thrilling movie, and so forth. Some activities require strong bodies in mental and physical. Of course, some old people who stick to the body training program could accomplish the achievement as young people do. However, for most old people, they can't.
The experience could be more enjoyable for young people since they are more often encountering something new for them to do, in other word, many first time experiences to do something. For instance, the first time to have a girlfriend or boyfriend, getting the married, having babies, and so forth. The first time experience is always impressive. In the opposite, older people already have adequate experience, so there is nothing new for them, which means less enjoy they could have.
The younger you are, the more chances you possess. Some important life goals could be achieved only if people are young. If missed, it never come back. For instance, studying abroad is the plan that people could do when they're young. As people get older, the barrier becomes higher. Lots of problems to impede older people, such as families considerations, health condition, money, communication gaps with young classmates.
In conclusion, the younger are certainly able to enjoy their life more than old people based on factors, incorporating better mental and physical body condition, more first time experience, and more change they have.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Did you mean 'comes'?
Suggestion: comes
...f people are young. If missed, it never come back. For instance, studying abroad is ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...d is the plan that people could do when theyre young. As people get older, the barrier...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16507936508 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51260565963 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2862657619 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4761904762 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.555066841602 0.236089414692 235% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18226667228 0.076458572812 238% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172826272487 0.0737576698707 234% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.358024127795 0.150856017488 237% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123801643567 0.0645574589148 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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