Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Most people agree that the joy in life fades over time. In my opinion, young people are able to enjoy life better than older people. I will explore why I feel this way in the following essay:
First, I believe young people enjoy life more because they have less worries. From childhood to young adults, most people do not have to worry about things like money, work, one's career or family. For instance, most children do not have to worry about stabishing a career or getting a Master's degree. As we get older, worrying about those things stop us from doing activities we like and spending time with our closed ones. I believe, this makes life feel more like a load rather than an experience to be lived.
Second, I think old people do not enjoy life as much as young people because of poor health. Old people have to pay more attention to their health than young people. For example, it is common for old people to have seeing or movement disabilities. This is important because it affects how much they can experience from the real world. A person with seeing problem might not be able to enjoy their favorite movie from childhood.
To conclude, As I see it, young people are more able to enjoy life than old people. Mainly because their lifestyle is more carefree and they posses a better health condition. Two things that allow young people to enjoy their lifes better.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun worries is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...eople enjoy life more because they have less worries. From childhood to young adults...
^^^^
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...to worry about things like money, work, ones career or family. For instance, most ch...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 246.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62195121951 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18101837818 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524390243902 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.617277041 48.9658058833 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.8 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.451613739962 0.236089414692 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167286958653 0.076458572812 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101600565619 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298160931024 0.150856017488 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165801482773 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun worries is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...eople enjoy life more because they have less worries. From childhood to young adults...
^^^^
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...to worry about things like money, work, ones career or family. For instance, most ch...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 246.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62195121951 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18101837818 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524390243902 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.617277041 48.9658058833 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.8 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.451613739962 0.236089414692 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167286958653 0.076458572812 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101600565619 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298160931024 0.150856017488 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165801482773 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.