Young people enjoy more life than older
Deciding whom will have more fun, is one of the life's more difficult choices. One may opt for the older or younger people. In my opinion, young generation have more fun. This is due to the modern technology, Taking risks and the psychological status.
First, the inventions made the life easier, more enjoyable and provide a rapidly flow of game's devices. the concepts of these devices is cornerstone of today's society, in fact, most of the young people nowadays have at least one of two of these devices, which older people normally do not have any knowledge about how to use them, Take my self for an example, I have PS4, PC, and Xbox, and till now, non of my parents know how or even try to play with them, they usually get board if they stayed at home for long enough time.
Another important factor to consider, as old saying goes "no risk, no fun". because fun often times accompany risks (dangerous games), there are fewer opportunities for the old people to take these risks, and that’s will led us to consider adults more likely to go with these risky games. As I remember, we want to Dubai, my parents refused to go with us to the middle of the see to swim, because the sea's waves was so strong, that's they can not hold to swim over there, but really we had a lot of fun. I know it sound horrible!!.
Lastly, from psychological aspects, older people less into to try new things, and usually they are alone. As for society, ignoring old people in their most crucial conjuncture of life, will cause many problems. This notion may cause other problems such as depression, alienation and also ruin their emotional life. on the other hand, young people will not care about this type of ignorance, because they already have their own things to do.
This essay discussed how technology, risks and psychological status play an important factors. in conclusion, when it come to the fun, definitely young people will have more fun regarding their life.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69740634006 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43379222624 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582132564841 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.6078386043 48.9658058833 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.875 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264607460522 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893377474501 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769120718023 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159075614772 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061050176631 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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