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your friend wants to lose weight. what advice would you give to your friend and why?

Losing weight can be frustrating and demanding, just as it sounds. There are different ways to lose weight. Some say balancing your diet is the best way, others say practicing exercise and doing certain sports shows more progress. If my friend wants to lose weight I believe both ways are important steps to your goal. I will support my decision by the following two main reasons
First of all, a healthy diet has been proved to be successful through the years. For example it is important to adequately proportion your meals. A balanced diet must conclude fruits, vegetables as well nuts and whole wheat. Moreover, the time you eat is crucial because abnormal or irregular eating habit is one of the greatest mistakes that will affect your health. Skipping meals and not eating on time can affect the normal balance of your body functions. Therefore i advice my friend to follow a diet plan that fits you best by a professional adviser
Secondly, being active and practicing exercise can help lose some extra pounds. Working out will not just help you stay fit but good for your heart and mental health. Exercise is not just for people trying to lose weight for example the elders in my district get up early and run some laps and exercise to warm up they say it helps them to not forget their precious memories and be active to keep up with their grandkids. For this reasons, I advice my friend to practice exercises daily
In conclusion keeping a balanced diet and exercising daily will keep you healthy physically and mentally.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 232, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing certain sports shows more progress. If my friend wants to lose weight I believ...
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Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... normal balance of your body functions. Therefore i advice my friend to follow a diet pla...
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: ADVICE_ADVISE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (verb) instead of advice (noun)?
Suggestion: advise
...nce of your body functions. Therefore i advice my friend to follow a diet plan that fi...
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Line 4, column 427, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ve to keep up with their grandkids. For this reasons, I advice my friend to practice...
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Line 4, column 443, Rule ID: ADVICE_ADVISE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (verb) instead of advice (noun)?
Suggestion: advise
...th their grandkids. For this reasons, I advice my friend to practice exercises daily ...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ep you healthy physically and mentally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 267.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76404494382 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44263104794 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7646443843 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8461538462 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253074080093 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101594301206 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818439326219 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145230142819 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774386406361 0.0645574589148 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

More content wanted.

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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