Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well.
This statement is fundimentally incorect; because of the lots of the things people should do, they just do a few of them in the best way; since doing thing turns in the best way turns to people talen, love and so forth. And in my opint of view it is not depent on their busy day time. therefore, I totallt disagree withe statement and I want to reinforce my opinion from the following aspect.
The chief reason why I generally disagree withe the statement is that people can devote time to what they really want. afterall, they never mention to the thing what aren't important to them. for example, my grandpa never work after he came back to the home from his work. one time I asked him the reason of his behaveraer, he said if you want noone askes from you any thing, you have to de their want in the wrose way. therefore, after that they don't want antthing from you. now I think most of the people choose this way in their life.
The second reason why I disagree with the statement is that, most of us work in the part of the day and can do alot of thing on the countinue time. for example, my father is a Civil engineer, he work a lot in the work, but after he was coming back to the home. he would help my mom, then we went out and he tried to educate us to drive a bicycle. I beleive that we have lots of things to say about him. and I think that he lives full and enjoes from all of his time.
The last but not the least, most of us want gourgeues life style and work in the two job at the same time. therefore, could't find time to do other things. if we understand that we can live just once, it will be easy to us to do what we want. some times we forgets our families, friend, and some times us. most of us just think about the earning money, but never have plane to have to use it.
In the nus shell, if we understand that we can live just once, it will be easy to us to do what we want. nowadays we forgetes the meaning of the happeness and just tries to get more money. we be the dall of the money. moreover, thechnology development encourage us to the this lifestyle. I beleive this kind of lifestyle never could continue untill the end and one day most of us undersatnd the meaning of the reall life, but I hope that wouldn't be so late.
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...ning of the reall life, but I hope that wouldnt be so late.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, really, second, so, then, therefore, for example, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 77.0 22.412803532 344% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 30.3222958057 208% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1373.03311258 133% => OK
No of words: 444.0 270.72406181 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.10135135135 5.08290768461 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.04702891845 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14211213237 2.5805825403 83% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 145.348785872 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45045045045 0.540411800872 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 419.366225166 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.55342163355 84% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 3.25607064018 461% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.51434878587 396% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 13.0662251656 184% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4713751641 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.875 110.228320801 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 21.698381199 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54166666667 7.06452816374 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 4.19205298013 549% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168209850161 0.272083759551 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476740385519 0.0996497079465 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077716963782 0.0662205650399 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110107581484 0.162205337803 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989833892287 0.0443174109184 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.3589403974 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 53.8541721854 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.0289183223 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.5 12.2367328918 53% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.34 8.42419426049 75% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.2008830022 62% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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