Comic
The Author fully supports the idea that comics are unique art form that had originated in America, while the Speaker opposes this claim by dismissing the Authors claims based upon three arguments.
The Writers first argument is that in the 1980s the comic Hogans Ally was the first commercially successful comic, with American features. This comic had marked the beginning of the comics commercialization. However, the Orator reveals that first successful comics are actually realized years before in Europe, in Great Britain and Switzerland. If the Hogans Ally was not the first successful comic, then this comic does not mark the beginning of the comics as the Writer suggested.
Second, the first action comic book was realized in America. This is cited by the Author as the valid argument to support the idea that comics are unique American art. Never would the Lecturer support this claim, remarking that not only the Supermen was created by Canadian artists, but also that the first action comic was published 16 years before Supermen in Belgium. As there is the Belgian comic that had predated Superman, then the action comics were not first popularised in America, as the Author claims.
If both of these reasons are not convincing arguments, the Essayist would rely upon the fact that the comic art had been proven to spread and influenced through the world. For instance, the Manga comics were inspired by the American comic brought to Japan after the Second World War. The Lecturer rebuts this argument. He explains that the Manga was actually inspired by the traditional Asians art. So, if the traditional art had influenced the Manga, it might not involve the influence of American comic art as one of the inspiring factors of the creation of the Manga as the Essayist claims.
Through contradictory arguments, the Speaker casts doubt on the validity of the Authors claims based upon the commercial success of comics, first action comics and on the influence on art forms
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'comics'' or 'comic's'?
Suggestion: comics'; comic's
...s comic had marked the beginning of the comics commercialization. However, the Orator ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1373.03311258 121% => OK
No of words: 329.0 270.72406181 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06990881459 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51732662257 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 145.348785872 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446808510638 0.540411800872 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 419.366225166 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.25165562914 479% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3048330038 49.2860985944 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.2 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06452816374 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.497038294096 0.272083759551 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.23888109335 0.0996497079465 240% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159117478438 0.0662205650399 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296681805828 0.162205337803 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150724888376 0.0443174109184 340% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 63.6247240618 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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