comics

Essay topics:

comics

The author of the writing mentioned that Comics are a uniquely american art form since beginning from the 1890s, claim that even when a comic did not created in America, have american influence.

The lecturer, on the other hand assert that from the 1870s in Europe had populars comics too, and even Superman was created by a canadien person. Their argumment is than comics art form belongs all world

All things considered, my conclusion is than comic is for all, like movies or books, no matter who popularized it

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
...s, claim that even when a comic did not created in America, have american influence. ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...assert that from the 1870s in Europe had populars comics too, and even Superman w...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 22.412803532 27% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 30.3222958057 30% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 434.0 1373.03311258 32% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 89.0 270.72406181 33% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87640449438 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.07147865564 4.04702891845 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41727152301 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 66.0 145.348785872 45% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.741573033708 0.540411800872 137% => OK
syllable_count: 132.3 419.366225166 32% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 13.0662251656 23% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 19.686430747 49.2860985944 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 144.666666667 110.228320801 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 21.698381199 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06452816374 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367605417607 0.272083759551 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.237690255851 0.0996497079465 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475487584457 0.0662205650399 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24643873602 0.162205337803 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542124901616 0.0443174109184 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.3589403974 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 53.8541721854 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 63.6247240618 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 10.7273730684 154% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.2008830022 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:

para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3

Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).

Don't need a conclusion paragraph.

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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