Essay topics: TPO-34 - Integrated Writing Task
The reading and passage both talk about Steller's sea cow, huge marine mammals which are lived in the waters around Bering Island of the coast of Siberia and extinct in about 1769. In the reading passage, the author mentioned that the cause of this extinction is not clear and list out three possible theory to explain this extinction. However, the lecturer holds a different point of view and retorted the stated theories one by one.
First of all, the author points out that the sea cow overhunting by the native Siberian people who used these animals as a food source was the main cause of their extinction. However, the professor challenged this theory. The lecturer stated that the sea cows were massive creatures- each of them was about ten ton. So, it is concluded that one sea cows could use as food for several months and they did not in need to hunt these animals in a large number.
Secondly, the passage claims that the ecosystems disturbance that caused a decline in the main source of sea cows' food, klep, brought about their extinction. On the contrary, the author stated that there are some reports that klep growth was sufficient during that time. The professor holds the opinion that if the klep had been reduced in that period of time, the number of other animals would have reduced while there is not any report of other animal extinction.
Finally, the author states that the European fur traders who hunt the sea cow for using their fur were the other potential agents in sea cow extinction. The professor, on the other hand, refuted this theory. According to the professor, by the time that these people arrived at the sea cow area the population of these animals was low. It is concluded that this reduction takes place long before the fur traders arrival. So, the last theory of the author detected unconvincing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...assage both talk about Stellers sea cow, huge marine mammals which are lived in t...
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Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ecosystems'' or 'ecosystem's'?
Suggestion: ecosystems'; ecosystem's
... Secondly, the passage claims that the ecosystems disturbance that caused a decline in th...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...at if the klep had been reduced in that period of time, the number of other animals would have...
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Line 4, column 404, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'traders'' or 'trader's'?
Suggestion: traders'; trader's
...duction takes place long before the fur traders arrival. So, the last theory of the aut...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1373.03311258 111% => OK
No of words: 320.0 270.72406181 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75625 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32438667986 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503125 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.23620309051 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5126028322 49.2860985944 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.466666667 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06452816374 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.495548867319 0.272083759551 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153121406144 0.0996497079465 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125319223748 0.0662205650399 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301245598117 0.162205337803 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662620718598 0.0443174109184 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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