genetic modification
Nowadays genetic modification is prevalent in each field such as trees’ improvement. The reading claims that it can be useful and good to use this method and believe that it’s possible to create trees that can be more useful for us and give three reasons for this. however, the lecturer finds all ideas dubious and present some evidence to refute them all.
The author argues that the trees that are genetically modified, can be design to be hardier than organic trees. so we can replace natural trees with genetically modified trees and they can resist in many fields of disaster. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that trees that are genetically modified can only resist in some field of nature attack and they are uniform. so if a specific unknown illness or somewhat that they are not modified for that , attack to these trees, they can not oppose and will destroy.
Furthermore, the reading passage hold the view that genetically modified trees can be more suitable and give more benefit for us, specially in cost. because we can change them genetically that their need to water decrease but their fruits or other things increase. On the contrary, the professor underlines the fact that if you use the genetically modified trees , you should probably pay more money. because the company that create and breed them, would catch you money for them and always they have stock of your trees’ fruits.
finally, the reading asserts that in some places that usually trees’ wood use as a heat source and building material and etc. we are unable to compensate this overexploitation because of inequality in speed of planting and harvesting. so if we use genetically modified tress we can use trees that grow faster and can recovery in less time. In contrast, the speaker dismisses this issue due to fact that the genetically modified trees grow more aggressive than natural one and usually we plant them among natural trees. so they use more resources such as water and finally can overcome natural trees and cause extinction in natural trees in a specific place.
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- TOEFL TPO 47 - Integrated Writing Task 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
...for us and give three reasons for this. however, the lecturer finds all ideas dubious a...
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Suggestion: So
...esign to be hardier than organic trees. so we can replace natural trees with genet...
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Suggestion: So
... of nature attack and they are uniform. so if a specific unknown illness or somewh...
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Suggestion: ,
...what that they are not modified for that , attack to these trees, they can not opp...
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Suggestion: Because
...more benefit for us, specially in cost. because we can change them genetically that the...
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Suggestion: ,
...f you use the genetically modified trees , you should probably pay more money. bec...
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Suggestion: Because
...s , you should probably pay more money. because the company that create and breed them,...
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Suggestion: Finally
...ve stock of your trees' fruits. finally, the reading asserts that in some place...
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Suggestion: etc.
... as a heat source and building material and etc. we are unable to compensate this overex...
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Suggestion: So
...ty in speed of planting and harvesting. so if we use genetically modified tress we...
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Suggestion:
...er dismisses this issue due to fact that the genetically modified trees grow more...
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Suggestion: So
...ally we plant them among natural trees. so they use more resources such as water ...
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Suggestion:
...atural trees. so they use more resources such as water and finally can overcome n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, furthermore, however, if, so, in contrast, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 5.04856512141 317% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 7.30242825607 274% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 22.412803532 219% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1373.03311258 127% => OK
No of words: 351.0 270.72406181 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97435897436 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56489573721 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 145.348785872 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492877492877 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 419.366225166 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1108113813 49.2860985944 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.125 110.228320801 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9375 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06452816374 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159697107267 0.272083759551 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690512096404 0.0996497079465 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831345177188 0.0662205650399 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104768651743 0.162205337803 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234373064442 0.0443174109184 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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