Grades encourage students to work harder at school. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
School is a very important part of our life. This is where we get knowledge. Some people believe that grades motivate the students to do better in their academic, others would disagree. In my view, I firmly convinced that grades encourage students to do better in their studies for two reasons.
To begin with, It motivates the students. For example, when I was in high school my friend Neha she always used to get A grade in all subjects and their parents felt so proud of her. I always wanted to get good grades to make feel my parents proud. So I did start to work hard, I used to study a lot. After a couple of months of hard work, I got A grads in my all subjects. Even I got nominated as the best hard-working student in my class. I was so happy that my parents were proud of me. This grad system at school keeps me motivated to do better in my academics. This example describes the reasons why I would love to have a grad system in school.
Moreover, it decides our ability. Depend on our performance we get grad which shows our understanding of the subject and knowledge. For instance, my brother uses to get A grads throughout his college. He was a very hard working and motivated student. His teachers ask him to work as a teaching assistant to help other students. Because he was good at his studies. They ask him to give an entrance exam to pursue a doctor’s degree and he did clear that exam. Because of the grade he was getting in his study teachers know his ability so they encourage him to go for a higher degree. If there were no grade system teachers don’t know our capacity. This example taught me that grades help us to do better in our life.
In sum, various perspectives and viewpoints exist on this issue, I am convinced that grades motivate students. Not only, it will encourage them but also decide our capabilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A grad' or simply 'grads'?
Suggestion: A grad; Grads
... a couple of months of hard work, I got A grads in my all subjects. Even I got nominate...
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Line 9, column 170, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A grad' or simply 'grads'?
Suggestion: A grad; Grads
...e. For instance, my brother uses to get A grads throughout his college. He was a very h...
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Line 9, column 329, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ching assistant to help other students. Because he was good at his studies. They ask hi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 65.0 22.412803532 290% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1373.03311258 111% => OK
No of words: 341.0 270.72406181 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46627565982 5.08290768461 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57052467677 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 145.348785872 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507331378299 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 419.366225166 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 3.25607064018 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 13.0662251656 191% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8020554822 49.2860985944 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.92 110.228320801 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.64 21.698381199 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.24 7.06452816374 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 4.33554083885 415% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191963258406 0.272083759551 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562144428092 0.0996497079465 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441795672059 0.0662205650399 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119811203102 0.162205337803 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425840546195 0.0443174109184 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 13.3589403974 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 53.8541721854 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.0289183223 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 12.2367328918 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.2008830022 62% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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