Sustainability of the Royal Family
In this set of materials the writer and the lecturer are discussing sustainability of the Royal Family. They widely contrast each other.The lecturer points out that the Royal Family doesn’t have importance as past whereas the author claims that the Royal Family can still control over the United Kingdom. The lecturer invalidates the writers points with following details and examples.
First unlike the writer the lecturer mentions the repercussions of the Royal Family on British citizens. According to him even though the Royal Family have been existence for a long time and to have great history, British public have become alienated from the monarchy.
Second apart from the writers opinion the royal involvement in British politics are ceremonial now. King or queen cant influence on government because they has no formal training or education in politics, so they cant offer wisdom to government. Also its questionable that the Royal Family represents Church of England in 21st century.
- Sustainability of the Royal Family 60
- Desertification in earth 50
- Urban Life or Rural Life? 50
- Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree? 70
- In your opinion which modern invention or scientific discovery has affected society the most? Use spesific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
even though the Royal Family have been existence
even though the Royal Family has been existing
flaws:
Need one more doubt.
The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 17 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 12
No. of Words: 159 250
No. of Characters: 823 1200
No. of Different Words: 102 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.551 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.176 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.578 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 66 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 44 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.44 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.467 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.649 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.14 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4