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The article states that Peary's acounts were consistent. he indeed rech the north pole and provides three reasons of support. However the professor states that there is no enough solid evidence available and refutes each of the author's reasons.

First, the reading states that Peary's account was confirmed by National Geographic committee. They veriefied that Peary's accounts were consistent and persuasive and he indeed reached the North pole. The professor refutes this fact by stating that the committe's assessments were not objective enough. they were infact biased and not trustworthy because the commiittee was consisted of Peary's friends and they only spend a small period of two days to investigate.

Second, the article claims that a recent expedition by Avery was conducted by using thw same kind of the dog sled and the same breed of dogs and it was consistent with Peary's account. However, the professor contends that despite some similiarities these expeditions had diffrent conditions. First, the Avery's sled weighted much less due the fact that he didn't bring his food with him and his food was thrown for him by airpanes. Second, Avery conduct his expedition in good climate condition but this wasn't the case for Peary's expedition.

Third, the reading avers that analyzing the shadows of Peary's photographs provides strong evidence that he reached the North Pole and took photographs there. The lecture opposes this point by saying that Peary's photos was taken by a primitive camera, so the photos are blured and faded due to their age and also the fuzzyness of primitive camera. According to the professor, because of the defects stated before analyzing the shadows couldn't provide a credible source to calculate the position of sun. therefore the analyzes are not accurate enough.

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