Education in Modern Times
Nowdays, in our modern civiliczations children education is one of the most essential and controvertial issues that experts debate about it. Infact, by educating our childred we transmit our accumulated knowledge, skills, rites, beliefs and morals to the next generation. As time passes, we see diffrent shapes and modes of educating children. In my opinion, parents today are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past for two specific reasons.
First and formost, the scientific and industrial revolution through 16th to 19th century totally changed the lives of humans. Before the revolution, people tend to fullfill their needs through farming. So, in the farm-based societies all the family members had to share responsibilities, for example: men tended to work on the fields, women had the duty to do the houseworks. The important point is that children had to work too, ofr instance they could help with feeding the livestock, bringing wather from the well or help to clean the barn. Therefor, there were no time for children to be educated. Only a elite minority could afford the expenses to hire private teacher for their offsprings. For instance my gradfather told me that he had to work in his father's farm from the age of eight, and there were no schools or teachers in their vicinity. However, after the scientific and industrial revolution, mass production causes people to require less work to provide their basic needs. Foods became more prevalent and with the invention of pipes the fresh water was brought to homes. In consequence, there were more time available for children to study and gain knowledge. In other words, the scientific and technological progress freed children from physical works. As time passed, the educational institutions were formed, so there were plenty of schools for children to attend. Today, our parents are more educated in comparison to the past, so it's rational to believe that they are inclined to be more involved in their children's education than past times.
Second, the system of education in our time requires that parents play a more essential role in their children's education. Nowdays parents execute variety of tasks to help their children to have a better study atmosphere. For instance, when I was at elementary school my father bringed me to the school on the schooldays. Whenever I had problems in mathematisc and natural sciences my mother would help me to resolve the problems because she had studied chemistry as her bachlore's degree. On the other hand, my humanity's issues were solved by the aid of my father due his expertise in litreture. In addition, our home had a great atmosphere for learning. I loved to seat under dim golden light of our hall and read my favorite books when there was a reach smell of coffee in the space and soft music was playing. to summrize, my parents were so influential in my course of studies and this was the case for many of my friends and extended family.
In conclusion, due to the scientific and technological advancments children were provided for enough time to pursue their education. Moreover, parents tend to be involved in their children's education because the educational system required them to do so. That's why I think parents have a more active role in theie offspring's education than before.
- Why Governments should provide free internet access to people 90
- Why people are more willing to help unknown people that in the past 73
- tpo 28 80
- taking a year off before going to university 73
- why requiring students to work on projects in groups and all members of the group receive the same grade on the project is beneficial 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 608, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... time for children to be educated. Only a elite minority could afford the expense...
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Line 5, column 814, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...n the space and soft music was playing. to summrize, my parents were so influentia...
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Line 7, column 256, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...cational system required them to do so. Thats why I think parents have a more active ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2795.0 1977.66487455 141% => OK
No of words: 554.0 407.700716846 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04512635379 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85151570047 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76216756447 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 284.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512635379061 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 860.4 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5392512968 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8214285714 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198615117681 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597354395572 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779880581251 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161198854238 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905166679834 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 86.8835125448 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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