TPO 31
In this set of materials the reading passage discusses the remained parts of Sinosauropteryx in the volcanic ash not related to feathers strucgture. While, the professor casts doubt on what is presented in the extet and believes that the evideces for verifying that this structurs are related to the feathers are very strong and the raesons that mentioned in the text is not convincing.
First of all, thhe fine lines cannot represent of a living dinosaur and animals in the buried volcanic ash cannot preseve. However, the professor claims that it ios unlikely to this structurs are result of decomposition because another animals that buried in the same sites are conserve in the well condition. and in this animals the feathers preseve very well so it is complltely possible that this struyctur related to the feathers.
In addition, the professor disagree with this idea that this structurs are thhis mterials remainds pf frills not feathers. She says trhat the chemical chrecterstic of feathers is quite different with chemical chrectestic of fills. Amnd in the feathers cotain Beta-caltin that clrearly shows that this structur aare related to the feathers not fills.
Finnaly, in the text stated that this posiction of presence of this feather like structurs realevent that this structure are not related to the feathers, The professor subscribe that the position of this structure shows that this feathers had a application for attract to mating and had function of dispalying.
- TPO-49 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends 70
- People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries. 71
- Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea? 70
- young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their community 76
- For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 310, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...tes are conserve in the well condition. and in this animals the feathers preseve ve...
^^^
Line 2, column 317, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... conserve in the well condition. and in this animals the feathers preseve very well ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is feather like structurs realevent that this structure are not related to the fe...
^^
Line 4, column 245, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... structure shows that this feathers had a application for attract to mating and ...
^
Line 4, column 280, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... had a application for attract to mating and had function of dispalying.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, well, while, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 240.0 270.72406181 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20416666667 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75476544172 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4875 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 371.7 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.3758365147 49.2860985944 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.777777778 110.228320801 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 21.698381199 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06452816374 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280632169831 0.272083759551 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122007618667 0.0996497079465 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630761020207 0.0662205650399 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175113839625 0.162205337803 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458585428512 0.0443174109184 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.3589403974 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.