TPO 40
The reading asserts that maintains a permanent presence of a human on Venus would be impossible because of inhospitable and extreme conditions of Venus. The lecturer, however, finds the idea dubious and casts doubt on the reasons proposed by the reading passage. The lecturer asserts that all of the problems can solve if the spacecraft be floated like a balloon rather than standing on the surface.
The author argues that the surface pressure of Venus is at least 90 times greater than Earth's surface pressure, which leads to crushing spacecraft after landing. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that atmospheric pressure is equal to the earth because increasing height cause decreasing the pressure on the atmosphere. So, there is not a dangerous condition for spacecraft, and they do not crush.
Furthermore, the reading passage holds the view that the surface of Venus does not contain oxygen and water since they have to supply water from the earth, which is impractical. on the contrary, the professor underlines the fact that the atmosphere of Venus is mostly composed of components of Oxygen. So, they can use a chemical process to extract Oxygen then make the water, and it is easy to obtain water from them.
finally, the reading asserts that the clouds of Venus are very thick, as sunlight cannot get through them. Also, the clouds reflect the sunlight back to space. As a result, with very little sunlight, humans cannot get electricity to power their instruments. In Contrast, the speaker dismisses this issue due to the fact that the clouds are thinner at a high level. Also, they can reflect sunlight. So, electricity can produce to power machines and equipment by both direct and reflected sunlight.
- TPO 40 75
- There is no doubt that nowadays, boosting information in today's world is one of the most important concerns of people, and it is not important who teaches you. Some may hold the opinion that parents teach children more than children teach them. Howe 73
- When parents cannot afford time to accompany their children, they could choose to send their children to child-care center where many children are cared together, or they could send their children to an individual caregiver. Which one do you choose? 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...easons proposed by the reading passage. The lecturer asserts that all of the proble...
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Line 1, column 290, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ding passage. The lecturer asserts that all of the problems can solve if the spacecraft be...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rather than standing on the surface. The author argues that the surface pressure...
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Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...r from the earth, which is impractical. on the contrary, the professor underlines ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...it is easy to obtain water from them. finally, the reading asserts that the clouds of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, finally, furthermore, however, if, so, then, at least, in contrast, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 286.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06643356643 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62640483309 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555944055944 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 419.366225166 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6061723585 49.2860985944 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6 110.228320801 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06452816374 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.451842589984 0.272083759551 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127250187164 0.0996497079465 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779419379776 0.0662205650399 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229834210997 0.162205337803 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125750112286 0.0443174109184 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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