TPO 44-integrated
The passage and the lecture discuss what the origin is of the silver coins that found at an archaeological site in the United States? The author of the passage present three reasons to demonstrate that founded coins are fake and maybe recently someone placed it at the site. However, the lecturer believes none of the reasons could strongly refute that the coins are not genuine historical evidence.
The author argues that coins discover a place that is so far away from the location of norse settlements. therefore, a thousand kilometers between norse locations and archaeological site means is the coin has no relation with settlements. The lecturer argues against this reason and believes that norse traveled long distances and this is not a reasonable story. Besides, archaeologists found other things in a far place too. As a result, this theory seems to be really dubious.
Furthermore, the reading passage holds the view that other coins have not been found at the site and that means is they do not carry any silver coins with themselves. Nevertheless, the lecturer illustrates that norse did not go to the us for a permanent settlement. therefore, they need to these coins when they back to Europe. Consequently, they predict that they need money to back their home.
Finally, the reading asserts that silver coins have no price in the us. therefore, these coins have been useless for them. The lecturer opposes this point by explaining that these coins are more appealing and norse carries other things like as necklaces. therefore, they could trade with native North Americans peoples. this claim does not possess a strong support in order to be acceptable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...from the location of norse settlements. therefore, a thousand kilometers between norse lo...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...o to the us for a permanent settlement. therefore, they need to these coins when they bac...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...carries other things like as necklaces. therefore, they could trade with native North Ame...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...de with native North Americans peoples. this claim does not possess a strong support...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, finally, furthermore, however, may, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 277.0 270.72406181 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06859205776 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67013821306 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 145.348785872 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519855595668 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 419.366225166 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8534116651 49.2860985944 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5882352941 110.228320801 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06452816374 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.504587440057 0.272083759551 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155670644812 0.0996497079465 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919895012047 0.0662205650399 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30573993092 0.162205337803 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161463093558 0.0443174109184 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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