TPO 46
In this set of materilas the reading passages discusses that, alteration in method of documenting medical reports from paper form to electronic form has a lot of advantage over traditional paper-based record keeping. While, in the listening the professer casts doubts on what is presented in the text and beleves that the reason that explain for advantage of electronic documention to paper based is uncertain.
First of all, in the text it is clearlt mentioned that changing from traditional form to the electronic system led to reducing cost and save mony. However, the professor claims that most of the doctors used mainly from paper records and they update their patients record to electronic version just as backup fild for safity.
In addition, the professor disagree with this idea that the electronic recoprds can dicline the chance of medical errors. She says that most of the docters even some of them that updated the electronic system of recording, they writghing the records by hand and later time the employees puting this details to the electronic system.
Finally, in the text it is stated that the electronic records provide the possibility of access of medical researcher to the large number of data from patient records. The professor subscribes that based Unaited State laws the patient records is privcy and access to them possible just through several and hard number of stage.
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- TPO 36 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 78
- TPO 45 3
- Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 80
- Nowadays children rely too much on the technology like computers smart phone video games for fun and entertainment Playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for the children s development 62
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, so, while, even so, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 229.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12663755459 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60390197323 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 145.348785872 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545851528384 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.1990790422 49.2860985944 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.75 110.228320801 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.625 21.698381199 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06452816374 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.514452058129 0.272083759551 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.221627532453 0.0996497079465 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976178672122 0.0662205650399 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30281038885 0.162205337803 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412351026128 0.0443174109184 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.3589403974 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.8541721854 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.7273730684 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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